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[notyourbroom]

Ah, I'd forgotten about this.



It's a wave cresting,
Breaking on the beach,
And receeding.

It's illustrated beautifully in the meter.

May your time be / filled with relaxing
 ^   -    ^   -      ^     -    - ^  -

sunsets / cool drinks
 ^  ^      ^     ^

and sand between / your toes.
 -   ^   -  ^       -    ^

It's so great:

^ -  ^ -  ^ - -  ^ -
^ ^  ^ ^
- ^  - ^  - ^

Trochee Trochee Dactyl Trochee
Spondee... Spondee...
Iamb Iamb Iamb.

Comments

[anotherinnocent.livejournal.com]

yeah, i know that this has nothing to do with your post, but i really like your user icon.

[notyourbroom.livejournal.com]

yeah



I really like most of mine, actually

[justplaincool.livejournal.com]

i love scanning poems! yay meter =-]